Crit

So the crit was on monday and I showed my work so far which was a near finished version of my animation. That being said I got some very useful feedback during the process, on stuff I could change or add to help imrove the animation. 

The suggestions - 

• Change speed of truck at city scene to make them fit in with plane landing. 
• Fix speed issue with final truck at city scene to stop it flying off.
• Add colour to grass with vegetable patch to help show it's positive. 
• Edit final text so it makes sense. 
• Add grainy textures to backgrounds to add retro feel 

Since the crit I have begun making these changes starting with fixing the speed of the trucks so they fit in with the airplane landing. Which now looks better and I much prefer it this way. Hopefully the other changes will be similar when I make them and really improve my work.